What is it?

Before morning tea Miss Taylor told us to get something that we can blindfold ourselves with. We were all left in curiosity about what was going to happen after morning tea.

When the object was placed in front of me the rock hard smell hit me in the middle of my nose, I thought it was a actual rock that someone had thrown at me without knowing it was me they hit. I had thought it was a orange or apple slice on the paper towel.

We were told we could feel it, when I touched it it stung my cracked finger like a bee. The skin felt like a orange skin, it had a nice texture to it and it was squishy. The shape of it was a semi-circle, I still had no idea what it was.

I could hear the juice oozing out of the piece of fruit as I touched it with my hands.

I tasted the semi circle and it was fruity then sour, bitter and revolting!!!! It was as sour as a unripe mango pick too early. I knew what it was by the taste but I didn’t say what it was out loud.

When I took my blindfold off I saw the most disgusting thing in my life!!! That is why it tasted so dreadful!! I have never liked them because they are too sour. It was a big yellow semi circle shape thing, A LEMON!!!!!!!!!

Aria's metaphor poem.

Over the past two weeks Room 7 have been learning how to write effective metaphors. A metaphor is a direct comparison to an object/thing.

We made Metaphor poems to describe us as a lolly,tree, vehicle, something in our community, a sandwich and clothing. Here is a photo of my metaphor poem.

Willie Apiata.

In room 7 this term for inquiry we had to chose a real life superhero to research. We had to come up with 3 open ended burning questions about our person. I did my research on Willie Apiata. He was an army force officer. I like that he is a really good person. He was really brave in the war.

Swarm of bees-By Aria.

I was eating my lunch with Emily, Grace, Skye, Issy and Livvy under a shady tree when, all of a sudden like the flick of a switch, everyone was

screaming and shouting.

It had all gone from calm to chaos! I wondered what was going on.

I heard people shouting “BEE’S ! BEE’S!”shouted KC and Ava. I looked around and saw a swarm of bees in front of me. I ran into the class with the rest of the kids like a group of angry dogs because Mrs May shouted “ INTO YOUR CLASS NOW!!!!”. We had to go into lock-down. Mrs May tried to call Dana but he didn’t pick up. Then Mrs May called Megan and asked her to call Dana.

When Dana got to school we stayed inside until he had gotten rid of most of the bees. Dana thought there were around 20,000 bees. Meanwhile, inside the classroom people were looking out the window and the other’s that were scared didn’t want to look. I saw Dana smoke the Queen bee and more bees followed. Then Dana left, what an exciting event!!!

By Aria

My speech 2017

Elaborated sentences

In Room 4 we have been looking at making sentences more interesting for our reader by adding details. We have had so much fun taking a boring sentence and making it great. Check out my examples.

The lady walked out of the shop.

The beautiful lady walked happily out of the corner shop, with a birthday cake in her hands, because it was her child's birthday.

The pig ate from his trough.

The hungry pig that was black ate quickly out of his trough, that was wooden and grey, because his tummy was empty and wanted food.

The teacher came into the classroom.

The amazing teacher skipped into the classroom, and found the class had decorated the room because, it was her birthday and they all had presents for her and they sang her “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!”

The mouse went into his hole.

The Queen mouse went into her beautiful, golden, clean, sparkly hide-out place.

The robber went into the house.

The sneaky and quick burglar made it’s way into the Queen’s house.

The girl walked into the classroom.

One-day the girl skipped into the clean classroom.  

The dog sat by his kennel.

The play-full dog ran twice around his kennel.

The bird flew in the window.

The blue bird flew in the window that was left open at night time.

The cat sat on the mat.

The ginger cat sat on the the old mat in front of the fire to get warm.

The computer stopped working.

The old computer that was in the classroom stopped working one day.

The door opened.

The door slowly opened with a creak and scared the cat.

The amazing teacher skipped into the classroom, and found the class had decorated the room because, it was her birthday and they all had presents for her and they sang her “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” They all came up to her with their presents for Mrs May and had a party with lots of food. Then Mrs May thought “ so that is why the children had so much food in their lunch boxes this morning”.

Were in the world is Mrs May??

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I think that Mrs May is at willy wonka’s factory and is in the chocolate river swimming and eating the plant’s which are made of sugar and other lollies. Then willy wonka came in and said “are you having a good time at my factory Mrs May”? “Yes” said Mrs May. But then Mrs May said “I must be going soon back to see my class because I miss them a lot”. Then Mr Willy Wonka said “My oompa loompas will take you in a helicopter back to your school”. “All you have to do is tell them where you want to go and they will follow your orders”. Then when Mrs May gets back to school every one in room 4 ask “Did you have a good time at Wonka’s factory”? “Yes!”said Mrs May. “ I had a great time there and I swam in the chocolate river”!